雅思写作学生作文错误.pptVIP

2.句与句无逻辑 3.组织句子 5.句子结构乱 8.内容不完整 10.表达、用词不准 1.less /overburden/little/reduce pressure 2.minor health ailments(问题) 3.cost sb a great lot /a lot of money ; be costly to do sth ; spend a lot of /a great of money 4.save some money; save a ton of money; economize by doing ; save up some money to do 攒钱 5.many /abundant/numbers [a large number] of/a large income/ 6.going abroad for studies/studying abroad/study abroad/going overseas to study/eager to learn abroad /international study/domestic study /internal study 7.face financial pressure /stress caused by money problems/overburden of tuition on the family /heavy financial burden/is a strain on family resources 8.exert(heavy) pressure; bring pressure to bear on sb.; put pressure on sb 9.be far away from home /be a long way from home /be away from home/ 10.the development of the individual self/enhance their self-development/the development of the library itself/.. own development 11.self-discipline/self-command/self-control/self-regulation 12.stand firm /get a firm foothold /take a firm stand /hold one’s ground in … 13. gain independence/stand alone /shift for oneself(独立谋生）/ .carve a career（创业)/carve out a career for oneself(独立谋生） 14. goods sold at bargain prices /cheapie/a cheap article 1.There is more pressure in unfamiliar environment . 2.In addition , for most of students who study abroad , their purposes are holding better jobs , earning a higher income and enjoying a more comfortable and secure lifestyle . And certificates of foreign famous universities really can do . 3.Even some can’t adapt to the different environment .These are problems , but not serious . 4. Mixing with domestic and international academic culture is a way of enlarging knowledge , this is a golden opportunity to learn a second foreign language . 5.It is difficult for them to know the foreign culture and communicate with foreigners . 6. it needs to spend the high cost . And language environment is different , students need a long tim