专四作文讲座2011-12.ppt

英语专四写作 田娅丽 2011-12-16 便条 格式（2） 内容（3） 语言（4） 语言得体性（1）(总分在8 分及以上可考虑加此分) 少于40 或多于80 字扣1 分 便条——格式（2） 便条——内容（3） 写便条的原因 要传达的信息 有关的希望、建议和要求等 便条——内容（3） During the summer vacation you would like to invite your best friend to your home town. Write a note to him/her, extending your invitation and telling him/her how to get to your home town. 便条——内容（3） Your good friend, John, is thinking of organizing an end-of-the-term party. Write him a note telling him that you like his idea and offer to help him. You have to be specific about how you can help him. 便条——语言（4） 严重词法、句法错误扣1 分 一个句子或同类错误扣1 分 拼写等小错误两个扣1 分 便条——范例 April 18th, 2011 Dear Lyn, It’s been a long time since we met last time. I’m writing to invite you to my home town this summer vacation with my heartfelt sincerity. You can catch the No. K47 train which leaves your city at 10:30 at night and arrives here at 7:30 in the next morning. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours Sincerely, Lily 便条——范例 Oct.26th,2011 Dear Mary, Where are you going during the summer vacation? Would you like to visit my hometown? I hope that you can come to my hometown. If you visit my hometown, you can come by bus or by train. If you can visit, I will bring you to visit beautful scenery of my hometown and good food. I expect you can come. Yours, Li Hua 作文 35分钟200词左右（15分） 11-13分?内容切题,完整,条理清楚,文章结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺恰当,少量语法错误 8-10分?内容基本切题,完整,?条理基本清楚,文章结构基本严谨,语法基本正确,语言基本通顺恰当.少量严重错误,一些词使用不当 5-7分?内容基本切题,完整,?条理不够清楚,较明显的母语痕迹.较多语言错误,许多词使用不当. 作文 框架内容 语法 书写 有闪光词汇 句型变化丰富 无语法错误 观点明确突出 作文——框架内容 State specifically what your opinion is. Provide one or two reasons to support your opinions. Bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. 作文——框架内容 Recently, the report that some college students hire cleaners to do laundry and cleaning in the dorm has immediately sparked a heated debate. Personally, I think that such practice should not be encouraged at universities. 作文——框架内容 It was re