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英语专业8级2013年作文试卷评析 华东理工大学 颜静兰教授 英语专业八级考试在线课堂 主讲人颜静兰教授简介 英语专业四、八级考试写作阅卷组组长 华东理工大学外国语学院副院长，博士生导师 全国跨文化交际研究会常务理事，上海市分会副会长 上海市外文协会理事，华东理工大学澳大利亚研究中心主任 研究生方向：跨文化交际学、英国文学、英语教学、英语演讲辩论 作文案例解析（2） 　　Is a sound social environment necessary for people to be good to others? The farmer, who saved a frozen snake by warming it in his arms, is bitten by the evil and poisoned snake to death. The innocent driver, who pulled over his car to check a seemingly dying lady, was accused by that woman of committing a hit-and-run. It seems that no matter in the story or the reality, good people are usually at the risk of being a victim by trying to offer their help. One of the explanations for the existence of these unlogical and unbelievable things is that the kind are not in a sound social environment and the hostility in their society stand low at first and waits for an attack towards those kind people. Hence, generally speaking, a sound social environment is necessary for people to be good to others. 　　 Firstly, a sound social environment protects the kind-hearted people. I identify here “a sound society” as a society where justice are valued so that in that society one won’t be threatened to keep the truth or to right the wrong. All the people can speak freely of what they have seen or heard without being bullied. In other words, a sound environment prevent the good people from the potential harm from the evil. 　　 Secondly, faith will be injected to people to believe that all those who are in need of help should be helped, or, there is no such things as one is in the “fake” trouble. Therefore, people won’t be hesitate to otter their help. （256 words） 英语专业八级考试在线课堂 该作文也是不及格作文，仅得 9分。 该作文语言还不错，有一定思想，不及格的主要原因： 结构失衡不完整，文章没有结尾； 逻辑思维有问题； 全文256词，词数未达标，内容不够丰富。 英语专业八级考试在线课堂 The farmer, who saved a frozen snake by warming it in his arms, is bitten by the evil and poisoned snake to death. The innocent driver, who pulled over his car to check a seeming