深圳市2012年中考写作训练 二经典案例.pptVIP

;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;Saturday April 10,2010 Sunny 　　Today is Saturday. I get up at 6:45 this morning. I had a quickly breakfast and then went to school in a hurry, but we no classes on Saturday. Then I telephoned some classmate and ask them to have a picnic. They were very pleasing. We were got to the park and enjoyed ourselves. At about 5:00 in the afternoon, we by bus to home. I am too tired, but I’ll go to bed early. ;How to correct English compositions;典型病例;一、名词的单复数问题：;二、主谓一致问题;三、时态和语态问题;四、Chinglish 现象;五、行文的逻辑性问题;六、词类错用;Writing skills (写作技巧)：;Saturday April 10,2010 Sunny 　　Today is Saturday. I get up at 6:45 this morning. I had a quickly breakfast and then went to school in a hurry, but we no classes on Saturday. Then I telephoned some classmate and ask them to have a picnic. They were very pleasing. We were got to the park and enjoyed ourselves. At about 5:00 in the afternoon, we by bus to home. I am too tired, but I’ll go to bed early. ;Saturday April 10,2010 Sunny Today is Saturday. I got up at 6:45 this morning. I had a quick breakfast and then went to school in a hurry, but we don’t have classes on Saturday. Then I telephoned some classmates and asked them to have a picnic. They were very pleased. We got to the park and enjoyed ourselves. At about 5:00 in the afternoon, we went home by bus. I am too tired, so I’ll go to bed early. ;You say!;; Bicycles are still popular on the streets in Beijing. It’s easy to go to school or go to work by bike. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bikes. But I think that running cars makes air dirty. It is harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be saved. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, I prefer to go to school by bike.; 实战演练 请给中国环境保护杂志的李编辑写封信,谈谈你家乡的环境污染,并谈谈你的建议。（８０个字左右） 参考词汇: problem,environment, pollution, pour…into, die, rubbish, vehicles(交通工具) ,