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作文 --- 要点作文 期末作文评分细则 内容要点： 概括主要问题：同父母关系紧张 针对以下主要问题提出看法： 父母不采纳他的建议 父母逼她做他不想做的事 父母要求他在学习上多花时间 解决问题的具体建议，如：有耐心，多沟通，先搞好学习等 说明： 以上内容要点在回信中要覆盖至少三分之二，可以用不同的表达方式。 可以在词数范围内有适当发挥 内容要点少于规定的，句子语法结构不对，时态、语态误用，均为大错；介词，冠词、单词拼写、大小写、标点符号方面的错误均为小错；3个小错相当于一次大错。 范文： Thank you for writing us about your problems with your parents. I’m glad you love your parents and want to get on well with them. You think they don’t understand you and don’t let you do what you want to do. My question is whether you understand your parents. I think your parents are right in getting you to do housework. In fact, they are preparing you for your future family life. As a student, you should devote most of your time to studies. It is their duty to urge you to spend more time on your studies. What you’re learning in school today will determine whether you can meet the greatest challenges in the future. My suggestion is that you try your best to do well in your studies and help with the housework as much as you can. In doing so, I’m sure your parents won’t be hard on you and will allow you to practice your hobbies. 信件作文写作要点： 看清要点，最好在审题时标注好，列出提纲 对所给出的提示，进行简要概括，然后扩充 注意书写 第一小节：已给 第二小节： 知心话： a. 感恩 --- 内容 b. 期望 --- 内容 第三小节： 寒假打算 --- a.内容 b.内容 c.内容 第四小节：已给 感恩：关切鼓励，倾注爱心 Thank you for… I’m grateful to you for… I want to express my thanks to you for… your care, your encouragement and love Thank you for your caring for me and encouraging me whenever I need. What’s more, I really want to express my thanks to your selfless love which makes me cheer up every time I’m in low spirits. 多加交流，使自己保持良好状态 communicate, in good condition/ a good state which will make me well-prepared for the coming College Entrance Examination 2. 创造条件，给自己提供适时帮助 create conditions, timely help 寒假打算一定要合情合理 I want to … in face of… Weather/time permitting, I plan to … because… If possible, I decide to… It’s important/necessary for me to …. * *