雅思移民类书信写作雅思移民类书信写作.pdf

雅思写作（普通培训类）Task 1—书信写作 一、基本信息及备考重点 1．考试时间—建议20分钟；篇幅要求—150-170words；评分权重—40% 2．书信或图表评分标准： Task 1 （书信或图表）按照以下三方面评分：Task Fulfillment （完成任务） CoherenceandCohesion （连贯与衔接） VocabularyandSentenceStructure （词汇与句子结构）。 TaskFulfillment指的是考生是否能够在正确审题的基础上完成题目的指令。 CoherenceandCohesion指的是文章通过一定的衔接手段（CohesiveDevices）来表明上下文的连贯性 VocabularyandSentenceStructure指的是文章的语言表达。 5分或5分以下的作文一般语法错误较多。 6分作文则一般没有致命的语法错误，用词和句子基本准确。 7分以上的作文用词丰富（Variety）、句子结构复杂（Complexity）。 3．书信写作类型 (08-08-30)Yourentanaccommodationforaweekandyoufoundthattherewere problemswit it.Writealetterto theownerandtellhimorher:  Whatthe problemsare  Describethe problems  Andsaywhatactionsyouwanttheownertotaketosolvethe issue (08-04-12)You recentlyboughtanitemofclothinginanothertown, butyoufoundsomeproblemswit itafteryou returnedhome.Writealettertothe managerandsay:  Whathappened  Whatarethe problems  Andwhatyouwould likethemtodo (08-11-20)You gota newspaperprize,butyou did notget ityet.Write a letterto inquireaboutthis. Inyour letter, youshouldask:  Whenthe prizewillcome  Whatyourexpectationofthe prizeis  Andhowtheeditorshoulddealwit itforyou (08-11-08)Writealettertothelocalcounciltoprovidesuggestionsonhowtoimprovetouristfacilitiesinyourtown. Inyour letter,youshouldgive:  Presentsituationoftouristfacilities  Yoursuggestions  Benefitsfromtourism 4．书信的格式与基本结构 You bookeda holidaywit a travel agency butthe tour did not live upto your expectations.Write a letterto the agency.Inyour letter,you: • Describethe problem • Explainwhatyouexpectedonyour holiday • Explainwhatyouwantthetravelagencytodo 1 DearSirorMadam, Iwis tocomplainabouttheserviceprovidedbyoneofyourtraveloperators,JennyChang. Icontractedwit her for a holiday I booked in Sydney for a total cost of` ＄2,000, but later discovered the tour fell below an acceptablestandard. On February 13