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高一英语作文评讲 My Standards for Making Friends 2009-9-2 高一英语作文评讲 My Standards for Making Friends 优点： 字体进步巨大 会创新地使用连接词 Last ,but , not least, in my opinion, 以问句开头或结尾，吸引人 有亮点：句型、谚语、固定搭配 Honest is the best policy. 需要改进之处： 1.want 的错误用法：①want后不可接从句; ②want后不可直接跟另一个动词原形 I want my friend could tell everything to me. I want make some friends in our class. 2. 系表结构不可缺少系动词 I’ll very happy to make friends with you. They should friendly to others. I don’t afraid that my friends will laugh at me. If you can happy easily, … If a student like that, I want to make friends with him or her. 3.从句要用陈述句的语序 You must know what are your standards for making friends. 4. 词性不要混用 I like the people who is happily. Happy, friendliness, thoughtfulness are the qualities I value most. You should be thoughtfulness and friendliness. Otherwise, I don’t like he. I like my friends to be thoughtfulness. They can’t loose-minded. Kind is an important quality. He should be kindly and friendly. 5. 两句话之间要用连词连接，或用圆点隔开，逗号不起连接作用。 I’m a freshman, I like making friends. (AB句) 6. 情态动词后直接接动词原形，不可加to或接动词复数或单数形式。 He can to calm me down when I am angry. My friends should are interesting people. 7. 固定搭配错误 Making a friend Open-handed(minded) 8. 单词拼写错误 Halpful intereste Standerds 9. 不要随意换行，要在两个音节间换行。单音节词不得拆开换行。 frien-ds, wi-th, wa-nt 如何换行？Begin， concern，finish 10. 不可让一个词同时做两个成分。 I want my friends are friendly. I’d like my friends are always loyal to me. 11. 用词不当 On the contrary 相反 (=instead) 12. 人称和数不一致 When other people are in trouble, my friends will be ready to help him or her. My friends is helpful. They should finish them homework. She always help others. Nobody want to make friends with a person who is impolite to others. My friends will try his best to make me happy. 13. 所有格表达有误 My friends won’t ignore other’s feelings. My friends should be concerned about his parents. He should be friendly to your