confucius孔子英文介绍.docVIP

As you all know, China is greatly influenced by Confucianism. Today I will introduce a famous person (people is plural, person is singular), Confucius. [Confucius, name Qiu, styled zhongNi, Lu Spring and Autumn period of people.]-- I dont understand what this means, but I believe Lu Spring and Autumn period of people should be in the kingdom of Lu during the Spring and Autumn period Is that what you meant?] Confucius is a famous ancient thinker, educator, and founder of Confucianism. (lists that do not end in etc. always need and before the last item in the list) Confucius was born in a poor family in the year 551B.C, [and he was born --since you already said that he was born you do not need to say it again, so you can delete this] in the state of Lu (now QuFu Shangdong province). His father, commander of a district in Lu, died three years after Confucius was born, leaving the family in poverty, but Confucius received a fine education. He was married at the age of 19 and had one son and two daughters. Confucius was a well-known leader in philosophy. [and he also made -- sounds more natural to say He also is famous for (usually you create or say phrases rather than make them)] many wise phrases and theories about [the] law, life, and [the] government. (Usually people consider Confucius sayings to apply to more than one type of law or government, so you do not need the article the (it is broader than on government, etc.)) Confucius is famous for his philosophy because [he made many wise saying in ancient China that helped many people]--his wise sayings helped many people in ancient China learn about nature, the world, and [the--delete] human behavior. He also helped the government and the emperor by teaching them lessons on how the emperor should rule his kingdom successfully. As the founder and great thinker of Confucianism, Confucius’s thoughts were mainly collected in the Confucian Analects (since the Confucian Analects are a specific thing, you need the article th