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* * 第11章 正文的撰写 11.1正文的内容 材料和方法（material and method） 11.2正文的写作要求 总体要求服从“为谁写，写什么，怎样写”，进而围绕主题，充分展开。 主题两件事：经得起检验的结果和结论；开创性的见解。 具体的说应该在以下方面适当详细： 1 问题的提出（引言中没有交代清楚的问题的背景和有关的概念和方法） 2 原理或方法：所采用的理论分析或实验研究的方法。 3实验材料设备 4新的设计和实现方法 11.2.1正文从问题提出，目的和方法说明开始 论文常用的一种方式。 ?11.2.2实验研究论文的正文 ?11.2.3理论与实验相结合 11.3句型库 11.3.1理论说明 Our theory is based on the assumption that …. This theory procedes from the idea( principle) of …… The underlying concept of the theory is as follows. There is a similar (a tentative, an alternative) theory that… The basic (fundamental , essential ) feature of this theory is …. The object of this theory is to…. The newly-advanced theory has some ( certain, many ) advantages ( assets,strong points, positive features, strong points, deficiencies, drawbacks, inadequacies, flaws, shortcomings).The validity of the theiry has become obvious in the light of recent findings. … The theory received universal recognition( general acceptance). 11.3.2公式推导 ……is given by…. …….as follows: …….as in the following: …….the following equation is botained …….this becomes… Therefore, we have…… ……..can be expressed as …….can be derived: ……..can be written: ……..can be described by…….. …….can be represented as….. 11.3.3方法介绍 引用已有的方法 The method of ……was first developed by…… The method of …..came into use as long ago as…….. The original proposal of this method was first published in…… 提出新方法 The method we use differs ( greatly, essentially) from the conventional one. The newly-elaborated technique is different from the one previously used. The mthod is now greatly improved…. 方法的评价The procdure we followed has certain advantages over the existing method. One of the assets of this technique is its simplicity ( reliability, sensitivity). Another good feature of this method is…….. This method allows us to demonstrate……. The above procedure makes it possible to evaluae……. This method is capable of providing …… 11.3.4实验描述 实验的目的 We made ( carried out, p