2010.11.22--11.28要背诵的四级范文.docVIP

Free admission to museums? Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Free admissions to museums? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. ?? ?1.越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是 ?? ?2.有的人认为这样做会带来一些问题 ?? ?3.在我看来…… ?? ?大学英语四级考试的作文在命题内容和形式方面已形成较成熟的风格。在内容方面通常关注校园生活话题和社会热点话题。今年四级作文的题目也不例外，是一个人们熟悉的社会话题—博物馆免费向公众开放。从形式上看，它沿袭了常用的提纲式命题，三点提纲暗示文章三个功能段落，考生只须按提纲依次写来，便可敷衍成文。 ?? ?但一篇120字的作文容量有限，故下笔时必须从三点提纲中确立一个（且只能一个）重点详加讨论，而另外两点从略。这样才能在结构上布局合理，在内容上重点突出。 ?? ?本次作文似可以提纲的第二点为重点，即分析博物馆免费开放所带来的种种问题。这一段要写得丰满翔实、字数应在100字左右。同时，在内容的安排上要注意内在逻辑性，在形式上注意使用过渡词语，以使论证条理清晰，衔接紧密。 ?? ? ? ? 提纲的第一点可写成引言，导出话题。这一段应简明扼要，迅速人题，一般不超过三句。 ?? ? ? ? 提纲的第三点宜拓展成结尾段，简洁表明自己的观点，亦即结论。 ?? ?如何立论呢？众所周知，博物馆作为一种社会公共资源，对于提升公民的文化素质起重要作用，因而理应免费向公众开放。在西方，博物馆早就免费了。虽然从理论上说四级作文的重点是考察学生的语言表达能力而非思想观点，但论点应该论之有据，而且这符合阅卷老师的心理期待，对评分有好处。 下面是根据上面的分析所写的例文，请注意体会主体段中过渡词语的作用： Free admission to museums? ?? ?In recent years increasing numbers of museums nationwide have become accessible to the public free of charge, with the aim of turning out civilized and informed citizenry. ?? ?Popular as it is, this policy also gives rise to a number of problems. First, free admission attracts a lot of visitors, who have to queue, sometimes in foul weather, for hours before getting into the museums, too much of a tax on the elderly and children. ?Closely related to this problem is the crowdedness in the museums. With children screaming and mobile phones buzzing, it is a rare person who can admire the relics with a peaceful mind. Most seriously, this practice poses a potential threat to the safety of the cultural relics housed in the museums. It was reported that many art treasuries were stolen from the Henan Museum in Kaifeng by a bunch of thieves disguised as visitors. ?? ?For all the problems, ?I think we should continue to open the museums gratis to the public. Anyway, the problems mentioned above are not insolvable. With proper measures taken, museums will play an even more active role in cul