雅思基础写作 三.ppt

复习与练习（剑四 ，4真题） 柱状图写作思路 1 如果要表示占据的份额，使用饼图的写作句型与表达方式 2 如果要表示变化，使用曲线图的写作句型与表达方式 例一 First, the UK travelers who went to France took up 11 million .Second , the UK travelers who go to Spain take up 8 million . Third, the UK travelers who go to the USA make up 4.5 million. Forth, the UK travelers who go to Greece take up 4 million . last , the UK travelers who go to Turkey make up 3 million 评语 只有简单降序排列，无概括性描述，无句型变化，词汇单一，只有量的描述，没有性质的描述，时态运用错误。 例二 From the information shown, we can see that France Was the most popular country visited by UK residents(11 millions), and the other countries visited by UK residents were Spain, Greece and USA, which accounted for 8, 4 and 5 million UK residents respectively. And Turkey was the least popular country visited by UK travellers(3 million ) 润色：注意连词、排序与词语的多样性。 润色后 From the information illustrated, we can see that France Was the most popular country visited by UK residents accounting for 11 million. Following that, a considerable amount of UK residents traveled to Spain, which amount to 8 million. Then after, the USA and Greece received 4.5 million and 4 million UK travelers respectively . Turkey was the least popular country among these 5 countries, which had only 3 million British visitors. 润色后优点 1 逻辑排序，含有对重点数据的描述和概括性描述 2 词汇与句型的多样性：每句话的主语、谓语、句型 3 连词的使用 表格 特点 1 所包含信息量最大 2 所含规律不明显 3 要抓重点数据和总趋势，不能面面俱到 4 注重数据见对比 图例（教材p 55） 读表 1 确定数据含义：读懂图：图中的文字 2 确定数据的排列顺序：是否有序排列 3 数据分组比较: 寻找联系 比较：相关数据 Lower illiteracy rate ? more newspapers sales 表达目标：一个国家的文盲率越低，就有更高的报纸销售量。 The lower the illiteracy rate of a country is, the more newspapers are sold in that country. 练习1：Wealth（richer） === women‘s status（higher） 2. dawn （closer）== it （darker） 练习 The richer one country is, the higher the women’s status in that country (is). The closer the dawn (is), the darker it is. Sample The highest GDP per capita (13,000 USD) goes to the country of Bahamas. following that, Argentina takes the second place, accounting for 9100 USD. As those lie i