从阅卷看作文教学-08.pptVIP

高考书面表达阅卷情况 I’m Li Hua from Class One Senior Three of Red Star Middle School. On April 12th, our class went to suburbs to plant trees in order to green our country. We got up early that day and went to suburbs by bike happily. When we arrived, we soon took action. We worked in different groups. Some people helped carrying the small trees. Some people planted trees. Others watered the trees that had been planted. After that, we set up a sign reads “Protecting the trees” beside the trees. Finally, we stood beside the sign with big smile and our monitor took a photo of us. Tired but happy, we finished our action. I like this activity not only because it’s good for environment but also because it’s educational. I’d like to take part in the same action next time. I am Li Hua, a student in Class one, Grade Two in HongXing High School. In order to support Green Action in China, our class went to suburbs to plant trees on April 12th. With rising sun, we rode bikes to the suburbs happily. After we arrived there, not wasting a minute, we began to work. Some digged holes with tools, some translated the little trees and others planted and watered them. Then we made a sign, which says “Protect trees actively, please.” At last all of us took a meaningful photo standing next to the trees. The green Action leaves us a special memeory, and we will continue to do something like this to protect our environment. In order to do some good deeds to help to improve our environment, our class organized an activity to plant trees in suburbs. Early in the morning, April 12th, I together with my fellow mates rode to the suburbs. The sun shone upon us and the wind blew swiftly above the growing trees. Finally, we arrived at our destination. Some after that, we ran into actions. Some of us dug holes on the ground, and it was our duty to carry the little trees and place the roots of them in the holes and cover them with earth. Girls made contributions to