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仔细审题 准确立义 规范行文 整洁书写 * 期中外语写作 主要问题： 不分段，层次不清 时态混用 中式英语 基本功欠缺 卷面不整洁 字数 Our city launched an activity named ‘Car-free Day’ on Sept. 22nd. It’s aim is to encourage people to… It receive all the people’s support. It was successful. 时态混用 People are encouraged to replace private cars with buses, bikes and metro. It improved people’s sense of protecting the environment…. It received support of the people of …. 中式英语 In 9.22, The city which I lived in and the other 107 cities launch ‘Car-free Day’ activities. This activity launched want people take bus or bike or walk. instead of drive their private cars. This activity was support by anyone. It encourage people that They should protect the environment and recycle materials. 基本功太弱 (几乎找不出正确的句子) Neat! Not good! Worse! Too short! Too long! 再叮嘱几句： 1. 保证三要素－体裁、人称、时态正确 ２. 避免外语作文的一些常见错误 ３.控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆） ４.搞一精辟的结尾！！ 一篇好的英语作文 Car-free Day was launched in our city and 107 other cities on September 22 to encourage people to take public transport, ride bicycles or walk instead of driving private cars. The campaign has gained much support all over the country and has raised awareness among all people of energy saving and environmental protection. It’s a real success. 范文 *