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作文高分突破 漂亮句子写作 逻辑组织技巧 写作常见错误分析 漂亮句子写作 1.完整性 句子完整包括语法无残缺，概念无遗漏。句子不完整是考生常犯的错误。如： he was the most popular poet. 是在什么时间，范围内受欢迎？ 显然表达不完整。 改为： he was the most popular poet in America, in 19th century. 2. 一致性 包括主谓一致、代词与先行词一致、分次、动名词、不定式的逻辑主语与句子主语语法一致。（这几类在后面说明）。 除此外，人称、数、时态、语态及结构上的不恰当转换也会破坏句子一致性。如： 1）he waits patiently on the platform until the train came.(时态不一致） 2) the students who want to go out for a picnic need to sign his name in the notebook. （人称） 3) he is good not only at music but also plays football well.（结构） 4) I wrote to him, but my letter was not answered.（语态） 3. 简洁性 简洁才是美好的写作，首先而且至关重要的一点就是简洁。繁冗的写作堆砌了许多无用的词藻，反而减弱表述的清晰度。当然，也不能仅仅因为简短就认为短句一定优于长句。 1）避免过多使用空洞、多余的短语 比较下面这对句子，注意体会二者的差别及效果。 　　1) Dr. Sun Yat-sen went to Japan by means of a big boat. 　　2) Dr. Sun Yat-sen went to Japan by boat. by就是by means of 。  It will be our aim to ensure proper health care for each and every one of the Chinese people. Our aim is to ensure proper health care for all Chinese. He has no sense of principles, whether he is in public or in private. He has no principles, public or private.  2）避免过多使用并列句。如： Eugene was an American playwright, and he had unhappy childhood, and he told the story of his childhood in a play, and he said it was written in tears and blood. Eugene , an American playwright, told the story of his unhappy childhood in a play, which he said was written in tears and blood. 3)避免过多使用从句。 过多使用从句会把主次概念混为一谈，削弱句子重点，如： he is a man who is honest, who always pays his just debts, and who observes the golden rules in his dealings with others. He is an honest man who always pays his debts, and who o 逻辑组织技巧 英语中的过渡句和连接词是文章通顺连贯的重要标志，根据语法中的平行和从属结构原则，一个复合句中必须要有一个连接词，否则句子是不符合语法规则的。如： 　　All flights had been cancelled, the passengers had to go there by train. 改为：Because all flights had been cancelled, the passengers had to go there by train. 或All flights had been cancelled, so the passengers had to go there by train. All flights having been cancelled, the passen