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大学英语四级作文 Women in the Modern World 1女性在社会生活中发挥着日益重要的作用。 2 随着女性社会地位的提高，她们的家庭地位也在日益改善。 3 女性解放运动仍任重道远。 Women in the Modern World 1 Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. ___________________. 2 With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. _______________________________. 3 In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized.____________________________. 九句话模板 ①Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. ②We can say that almost all jobs are done perfectly by women. ③Women are no longer looked down upon by society. ④With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. ⑤Husband and wife are now equal in the family. ⑥They cope with problems of daily life together. ⑦Also, you can hardly find that in today’s families, women are busy with dinners. ⑧In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. ⑨That’s really the problems we should solve immediately. 14分实例 I?feel?it?a?great?honor?to?be?your?guide?today.?First,?on?behalf?of?my?company,?I?warmly?welcome?all?my?distinguished?guests?from?Australia?to?visit?Shanghai?and?the?Oriental?Pearl?TV?Tower.? Located?on?the?Huangpu?River,?the?Oriental?Pearl?TV?Tower?is?now?the?symbol?of?the?city.?Built?in?1994?and?opened?to?the?public?in?1995,?it?is?now?the?highest?building?in?Shanghai?and?the?third?highest?in?Asia.?The?Tower?has?a?quite unique?structure?and?consists?of?3?large?balls?and?5?small?balls.? Inside?the?balls,?you?can?have?a?bird’s?eye?view?of?the?city.? Our?schedule?for?the?trip?to?the?TV?Tower?is?as?follows:?you?have?an?hour ?from?9:30-10:30am?to?experience?the?history?of?Shanghai?on?the?first?floor.?Then?we’ll?assemble?in?the?middle?of?the?hall?at?10:30?and?have?another?hour?to?overlook?at?the?beautiful?city?sceneries?in?the?middle?ball.? Finally?please?do?remember?to?go?to?