阿甘正传,英语作文.doc

阿甘正传,英语作文 篇一：英语写作指导及范文 1. A Film Review 写作指导 写作任务: 假如你们学校的英语社团组织了一次英文电影欣赏活动,请你写一篇英文电影评论。 词数: 100左右 分析: 本次写作任务是写一篇电影评论。影评一般包括三方面内容:电影背景介绍,电影内容简介和评论。其中电影评论是写作的重点。在对某部电影评论之前,作者要明确读者熟悉所评论的电影,至少应该有所了解。因此对影片的背景介绍能使读者对电影有一个大致了解,一般包括对影片的故事背景、演职人员和获奖情况的介绍。影片内容回顾能使没有观赏过影片的观众了解剧情,为下文的影评做好准备。影片内容回顾要简明扼要,切忌拖沓冗长,但也要清楚交待故事的进展情况,尤其是与影评相关的细节。这一部分一般不加入个人的主观评价,只需要客观陈述故事内容即可。评论部分是影评的重点,可以从剧情的编排、演员的表演或者观后感悟等方面进行评价和论述。对高中生而言,我们只需要针对其中的某一点进行深入评论即可,不用面面俱到。需要注意的是,尽管作者可以放开思路进行评论,但始终不能背离所介绍的电影。影评写作一般用现在时态。 初稿: Forrest Gump is my favorite movie which I have seen almost five times. On the one hand, I’m really moved by the real life of American people that time, on the other hand, by the confidence and courage taught by Gump’s mother. She would sacrifice anything to make her son understand the meaning of life and make him believe he is like everyone else. Just like Mum said: life was like a box of chocolates; you never know what you抮e gonna get. So that is why he always did everything seriously from his deep heart. Stupid is as stupid does. I think maybe we should be stupid sometimes in our real life now. Life is a gift and we should not waste it. 教师点评: 这篇初稿不惜笔墨大谈电影观后感和收获,但是忽略了对电影内容的介绍,这是一个较大的失误。尽管《阿甘正传》是一部家喻户晓的电影,但仍应在文章开头对影片进行简单介绍。 其次,在个人感想上,作者的思维比较混乱。虽然涉及到了很多方面,但是都不够深入。可以就电影感人的原因和观后启发深入探讨。另外,在表达方式上,文章还需要从以下几个方面进行改进: 1. 短语用法错误:on the other hand意思是quot;另一方面quot;,在英文中,quot;另一方面quot;必须和quot;一方面quot;所说的意思相反,建议改为:not only ... but also ... 。 2. 连词用法错误:Just like Mum said: ... So that is why he always did ... quot;Soquot;在英语中往往表示因果关系。仔细推敲这两句话,并不能由前句得出后句的结果,建议将quot;So ...quot;句改为quot;Gump does everything seriously with the belief that he could do the best as long as he makes effort.quot; 下面我们来看修改后的成稿。 成稿: The film Forrest Gump is about a person with a learning disability who is also unluckily born with a serious back problem. Most people think that people like Forrest can never succeed in anything, but this unlucky man achieved more than most people. He became a football st