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Teacher Comments on the quality of this sample assignment The attached essay is on the topic of imperialism. It is an essay style assignment that meets all of the requirements of A+ in all criteria. The essay is clearly and positively argued, devoid of unnecessary factual material and rigorously attentive to the actual question in the title. It has an interesting theme or interpretation, which goes further than other excellent answers on this topic in explaining the reasons for late nineteenth-century imperialism. My comments on the essay are reproduced as follows:- An excellent essay - I have given it full marks because I feel it is as good an answer to the question as I could expect and is clearly of university standard. You have done your research extremely well, and documented the essay with valuable references and quotes. All in all, the work done for the essay and the understanding you have demonstrated of the topic is first-rate. The argumentation is clear, strong and well supported. I like the generally thematic approach which is necessary for the topic. Your country-by-country method at the end of the assignment does support your hypothesis and makes a number of points very clear. This approach was taken by other students for the whole essay and while it was acceptable your thematic approach at the start of your essay added to the quality of the final product. On the whole, this is a very distinguished piece of work, which reveals a fine historical perspective and a clear judgment derived from solid reading and thought. It is a model of what can be achieved by careful argument and interpretation.  The phase of European expansionism in the last quarter of the nineteenth century has been variousely explained as the product of the economic forces or of international political rivalry. Analyse the motives of the major European states in their imperialistic activity during this period. European expansionism in the last quarter of the nineteenth centu