六强写作1.doc

六强写作1 开篇句写法专题 一、段首句不同位置及功能： 1、开篇段首句——即首段首句 功能：破冰开篇、避免生硬 2、中间段首句——即中段首句 功能：流畅过渡、水到渠成 3、结尾段首句——即末段首句 功能：引出结论、一目了然 二、开篇句精彩表达三要素： 1、明确点题使阅卷人放心 2、结构精彩令骨骼健壮 3、适量修饰使句子饱满 三、开篇句方法揭秘： 1、简单句开篇 2、并列句开篇 3、复合句开篇 1、简单句开篇 1）主 + 谓 事情 + 发生 2）主 + 谓 + 宾 人们 + 谈论 + 事情 事情 + 引起 + 争论 3）主 + 系 + 表 事情 + 是 + 怎样的 步骤一、确定点题词 口诀：题目、提纲句，合并同类项 对比：Should Firecrackers Be Banned? 有人认为放鞭炮是好事，为什么？ 有人认为放鞭炮是坏事，为什么？ 点题词：鞭炮——Firecrackers 步骤二、谓语变精彩 口诀：完成加进行，切换主被动 1）事情+发生 The debate has happened. 2) a. 人们+谈论/关注+事情 People have been talking about a topic. 2) b. 事情+引起+争论/关注 Firecrackers has caused a debate. A debate has been caused by firecrackers. 3) 事情+是+怎样的。The debate has been common. 开篇句主干部分集合： 1、A debate has happened. 2、People have been talking about a topic. 3、A debate has been caused by firecrackers. 4、A debate has been common. 两个万能破冰开篇句： 5、There has existed a debate/ topic/ phenomenon of/ (that) … 6、It has been common (to hear/ to see/ to experience) that… 主干部分替换词集合 1、A debate has happened. 辩论：dispute, argument, disagreement, controversy 话题：topic, issue, matter, problem 现象：phenomenon, occurrence, trend 发生：occur, take place, arise, appear, emerge 2、People have been talking about a topic. 3、A debate has been caused by firecrackers. Firecrackers: 确定中心词 Cause: exert, arouse, breed, engender, give rise to 关注：concern, attention, notice, concentration, focus 4、A debate has been common. Common: universal, pervasive, prevalent, prevailing 5、There has existed a debate/ topic/phenomenon of/ that … 6、It has been common (to hear/ to see/ to experience) that… 开篇句主干替换词： 话题争论和现象，都能发生不会忘； 牢牢抓住中心词，引发关注很平常。 步骤三、添加修饰成分 不同的：dissimilar, diverse, varied, various, a variety of, a range of, a mixture of 人们的: people’s，citizens’, individuals’ 表时间：“当前”的词或短语 Nowadays, recently, lately, currently, presently, at present, these days, in recent years，at the present time, 表地点：校园或社会 on campus i