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写作是切忌不审题，不构思，想起一句是一句，毫无整体观念。在写作时既要注意整体构思，又要注意每句的语法和单词拼写。同时注意前后句子和段落之间的衔接。段与段之间如要注意使用However, Therefore等词。注意一个句子中只有一个位于动词。 典型错误汉式英语: there are many reasons give rise to this social problem. (giving). Smoking cigarettes will do harm to our body. 改为smoking cigarettes is harmful to our health. 把心放在学习上：误：we should put our heart into the study. 正：we should focus on study. 开阔视野 误：sth can widen our eyes 正：broaden/widen/expand one’s horizons/ minds, broaden one’s outlook.扩大知识面：widen/ expand one’s knowledge. 据我看来学习最重要误：according to me，I will try my best to study well first.正：as far as I am concerned, studying will is the first priority. 导致这个社会现象的原因主要有五点 误：the chief reason for the social phenomenon have five points.英语中的have表“拥有”而there be 句型中的“优”表示“存在于”正：There are five reasons for the social phenomenon. 或者five reasons can be summarized to account for the social phenomenon. 注意more 后跟形容词原型而more and more后面用于修饰名词而不能修饰形容词，更不能在后面跟比较级。 如随着城市的发展，绿地变得越来越少 误：with the development of cities, green land becomes less and less.正：with the development of cities, the amount of green land is decreasing more rapidly.或with the development of cities, the amount of green land is becoming less and less。 结构不完整。在使用从句或非谓语动词时，缺少主语或谓语动词，或多个位于动词连用。误：people think go to a movie will cost a lot of money.正：people think going to a movie will cost a lot of money. 误：without electricity, the world would become dark and even unable to see a finger. 注意and后面的谓语和the world 不搭，正: without electricity, the world would become dark and a person could not even see a hand in front of his face. 误：the fake commodities flooding the market in China. 句子缺少谓语动词。单独的动词ing 形式是非谓语动词，不能作谓语，正：the fake commodities are flooding into the markets in China. 人称不一致 误：study hard now so that we can cope with the change and challenge. 主句用祈使句，后面应该是you, 正： study hard now so that you can cope with the change and challenge. 误：but when customers buy the advertised g