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一、作文评分标准1.本题满分为15分。2.阅卷标准共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷1至2份。3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）;若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，则可加1分（即9分）或减1分（即7分）。但不得加或减半分。4.评分标准:2分—条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。一塌糊涂5分—基本切题。表达思路不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。糊里糊涂8分—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。马马虎虎11分—切题。表达思路清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。清清楚楚14分—切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。漂漂亮亮二、阅卷实例题目： Bicycles An Important Means of Transport in China.提纲：（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及（2）和汽车的比较（3）自行车在中国的前途Score: 14 Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -man and woman, old and young-ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is calledthe kingdom of bicycles. Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents. In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.Score: 11 There millions of bicycles in todays China. Bicycles are very important means of transport in peoples daily lives. Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the riders strength, biycles are popular all over the world, especially in China.Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable for China as a developing country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has. On the cou