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基础写作讲义
基础写作讲义
一、写作之建立框架篇
高分作文经典得分表达总结:
观点一,二,三:(加三分)
1.第一:
In the first place
First and foremost 首要的
To begin with
分析原因时:the most important factor to be considered is + 名词 / ( + that + 句子)
谈论关注的要点时:Close attention should be paid to + the issue / phenomenon名词 / ( + that + 句子)
例:
首要考虑的最重要的问题是政府应该紧密关注房价问题!
The most important factor to be considered is that Government is supposed to pay closer attention to housing price!
FOR 高端人群
改造:the most important factor to be considered is + 名词(that + 句子)
成品:The most vital element to be taken into account is +名词 (that + 句子)
例:对于中国来说,教育是立国之本
As for China, the most vital element to be taken into account is to develop our education.
第二:
In the second place
Furthermore
谈论对象原因:it is also of significance to take + 名词 + into consideration.
It is also of significance to take into consideration the fact that + 句子
例:
加强我们保护自身权益的意识也是我们必须要重要考虑的
It is also of significance to take into consideration the fact that enhancing our consciousness for our rights and interests.
第三:
In addition
谈论关注对象或者原因时:
Besides what is mentioned above, it’s necessary to think about…
例:此外,旅客们超量携带的行李要额外付费
Additionally, The passengers have to pay additional charges for their extra luggages.
词汇补充:
附加税
Additional tax
补充规定
Additional regulation
词汇补充:
3. 加班车
Extra bus
4. 额外损失
Extra loss
例:除了以上所提到的,我们还很有必要考虑的是加强我们国家的自主创新能力。
Besides what is mentioned above, it’s necessary to think about that strengthening independent innovation of our country.
FOR 高端人群
改造:besides what is mentioned above, it’s necessary to think about …
成品:In addition to what is referred above, it’s essential to concentrate on that …
注意:(1)既要防止堆砌一堆,又要巧妙偷偷堆砌一点
(2)将你的亮点句型安插在各个段落最显眼的位置
二、写作之连接词篇
高分作文经典得分表达总结:
一方面又一方面
(1)For one thing ; for another
例:犀利哥一方面很帅,另一方面很有型
For one thing, XiLi brother is quite handsome; for another thing, he is awfully stylish.
(2)On the one hand ; on the other hand
例:一方面凤姐很自信,另一方面她实在是丑的不能看了
On the one hand, Feng sister is surprisingly confident; on the other ha
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