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基础写作讲义 一、写作之建立框架篇 高分作文经典得分表达总结： 观点一，二，三：（加三分） 1.第一： In the first place First and foremost 首要的 To begin with 分析原因时：the most important factor to be considered is + 名词 / ( + that + 句子) 谈论关注的要点时：Close attention should be paid to + the issue / phenomenon名词 / ( + that + 句子) 例： 首要考虑的最重要的问题是政府应该紧密关注房价问题！ The most important factor to be considered is that Government is supposed to pay closer attention to housing price！ FOR 高端人群 改造：the most important factor to be considered is + 名词（that + 句子） 成品：The most vital element to be taken into account is +名词 （that + 句子） 例：对于中国来说，教育是立国之本 As for China, the most vital element to be taken into account is to develop our education. 第二： In the second place Furthermore 谈论对象原因：it is also of significance to take + 名词 + into consideration. It is also of significance to take into consideration the fact that + 句子 例： 加强我们保护自身权益的意识也是我们必须要重要考虑的 It is also of significance to take into consideration the fact that enhancing our consciousness for our rights and interests. 第三： In addition 谈论关注对象或者原因时： Besides what is mentioned above, it’s necessary to think about… 例：此外，旅客们超量携带的行李要额外付费 Additionally, The passengers have to pay additional charges for their extra luggages. 词汇补充： 附加税 Additional tax 补充规定 Additional regulation 词汇补充： 3. 加班车 Extra bus 4. 额外损失 Extra loss 例：除了以上所提到的，我们还很有必要考虑的是加强我们国家的自主创新能力。 Besides what is mentioned above, it’s necessary to think about that strengthening independent innovation of our country. FOR 高端人群 改造：besides what is mentioned above, it’s necessary to think about … 成品：In addition to what is referred above, it’s essential to concentrate on that … 注意：（1）既要防止堆砌一堆，又要巧妙偷偷堆砌一点 （2）将你的亮点句型安插在各个段落最显眼的位置 二、写作之连接词篇 高分作文经典得分表达总结： 一方面又一方面 （1）For one thing ; for another 例：犀利哥一方面很帅，另一方面很有型 For one thing, XiLi brother is quite handsome; for another thing, he is awfully stylish. （2）On the one hand ; on the other hand 例：一方面凤姐很自信，另一方面她实在是丑的不能看了 On the one hand, Feng sister is surprisingly confident; on the other ha