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第一次月考作文评讲 --------观点式作文 审题 1 要点:9个×2+6语言分+1书面分 2 时态:一般现在时/一般将来时 3 人称:第三人称,students(they),parents 4 文体:一般 5 分段布局:Pa1:①--- ②. ③. ④ Pa2:⑤--- ⑥. ⑦. ⑧ Pa3:⑨ 罗列关键词 1.如何写主题句 ①:百分数,分数+ of the+n./ of them ②: some people… other people/others… 如:Pa1: 40% of the students are for/in favor of the idea. Pa2: However, 60% of them are against it. 如:Pa1: some people agree with/to the idea. Pa2: However, other people/others disagree (with/to it). 如:Pa1: Some people think that students can make friends on line. Pa2: However, others don’t think so. 典型错误 1. There have/are 40% students think parents should keep their children company. Have 40% students think… 40% of us agree parents to keep their children company. ① 40% of the students think … ② 40% of us agree that parents should keep…/ 40% of us disagree with it. 观点式作文模板 The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三). From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice . * 2.照顾好:take good care of sb look after sb well 3.给某人做好吃的饭菜:cook tasty/delicious dishes/meals for sb. 帮某人洗衣服:wash clothes for sb./ do some washing for sb. 4.有更多的时间学习和休息:have more time to study and rest./ can spend more time on study and rest. 5.无法养成独立生活的习惯:rely on their parents all the time/ stop them from developing the habit of living

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