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HappinessEveryone desires and pursues happiness. But happiness means different things to different people. Nowadays, a lot of people in society think the more money they have the more happiness they will obtain. As a result they try their best to get money, even without considering the law. In my view,whether one is happy or not is decided by yourself.To be happiness,we should try to keep health and do something that is meaningful.Firstly,I think health is the most precious thing in the world. Today most of people’s buildings have become weaker and weaker compared with the past owing to the serious pollution from modern chemical industries. If you get a sick body, it is sure that you do not have the enough energy and essential action to approach your destinations. Secondly,everyone should try their best to help others. Helping others is helping yourself and sending Rose to others while fragrance is left in your hand.So Doing meaningful thing is also happiness.Certainly to be happiness,we should avoid damaging the interests of others and breaking the law.If you want to obtain happiness in the long run,you must choose a right way.Above all, the happiness is that seeking and finding how to serve the people and devote ourselves to our motherland. At the same time,happiness is not far from you. Try to grasp it and enjoy it.85 HYPERLINK /t13952.html \t _blank 评语： 文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。1.1 Happiness Everyone desires and pursues happiness. [学习提示] 易混词汇: desire, wish, hope, expect, want, long 都有“希望”之意。?? 1.2 But happiness means different things to different people. [搭配统计] 动名搭配 mean...thing 在教材中出现过 HYPERLINK /corpus/snt/?q=mean%20thing/von \t _blank 1321 次?? [学习提示] 易混词汇: different, various, diverse 均含“不同的”之意。 HYPERLINK /t24950-1-1.html \t _blank 详情点击?? [批改提示] but的近义表达有nonetheless或nevertheless。?? [批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与 HYPERLINK /forum.php?mod=viewthreadtid=12942page=1extra= \l pid30263 \t _blank person的区别。 1.3 Nowadays, a lot of people in soci