外研版 Book 1 Module 3 Writing PPT.pptVIP

* Write a paragraph about one of these topics. My first family holiday My first train ride The most unusual journey I’ve made The best journey of my life Example: The first family holiday I can remember was when I was five. At six o’clock in the morning, we went to the bus station and … 如何写旅游经历 假设五一劳动节(周日)，你带着外国朋友Mary到青岛海边游玩。请根据下面表格中的提示内容写一篇英文日记来记叙一下你们的游览经过。 爬山、看风景，约五点返回 爬山 下午 吃烧烤海鲜等 啤酒城 中午 拍照片、沙滩散步、海中游泳 海边 上午 活动 地点 时间 注意：1. 词数：100左右； 2. 日记开头 已经给出，但不计入总词数； 3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 4. 参考词汇：啤酒城Beer Castle；烧烤barbecue。 Sunday 1st May Fine Today is May Day. _______________________________ __________________________________ 1. 审题与定调 ①格式：日记；②文体：游记属于记叙文；③时态：以过去时态为主，但描述景色或发表议论时可用现在时态；④人称：第一人称为主；⑤内容：以旅游活动为主，介绍旅游时间、天气状况、人员、交通方式、目的地、出发时间、到达时间、返回时间等为辅，可以适时描写自己的感受。 写作指导 注意：日记一般按事件发生的先后顺序记叙，常需要借助一些表示先后顺序的词语。如：early in the morning, at first, then, later on, afterwards, at noon, after breakfast, soon, finally, at last等。 2. 确定主体内容 本文以游览的时间顺序为线索，记叙青岛一日游的主要活动，即上午、中午和下午在不同地方的不同活动。 3. 审定篇章结构 全文可分三段： 第一段：交代时间、地点、人物及事件。 第二段：记叙游览的经过。 第三段：抒发感情，总结全文。 4. 常用表达 表达旅游活动的相关动词或短语：visit, pay a visit to, start off, take photos, swim, drive, drink, enjoy the beautiful scenery, fly ... 相关修饰景区的形容词：attractive, famous, well-known, modern, beautiful, wonderful, green, white ... 相关表示交通方式的短语：by car, drive to, walk to, on a bus ... 分享感受：be attracted / moved by the beauty / view, interesting, never forget, an unusual experience, tired, love, excited, leave an unforgettable impression on sb., one’s trip to ... is unforgettable, have a positive effect on, have a good time, enjoy oneself ... 句型： We visited some places of interest, where we ... and ... We visited the famous ..., from which we learned more about ... How time flies! Although ..., we felt happy, because we had ... *