牛津深圳版英语八年级上Unit 3《Computers》（Writing）课件.pptVIP

八年级 上册 Writing Objectives To understand some information about monitors 2. To learn to write an email about monitors 假如你是Mary Smith，就职于某相机公司的销售部。当你得知某顾客昨天订购的相机(C1530)已售完时，你想向这位顾客发一封邮件表示歉意，并向其推荐一款类似的相机。请根据表格中的提示信息完成此邮件。 C1530 ￥1,035 Made in 2012 Screen Size: 3 inches Colour: golden, black C1533 ￥1,158 Made in 2013 Screen Size: 3 inches Colour: golden, red, black 词数：80左右。邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir/Madam, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Mary Smith 【写作指导】 1. 该邮件属于商务邮件，特点是简单明了，在恰当的称呼和寒暄之后就直接进入主题。 2. 邮件格式为：首先，表明邮件的主题，如： We are sorry that we ... (说明原因)；其次，提出解决的方法或建议，如： However, we ... (解决方法或建议)；最后，再次表达歉意，如：Again, we are really sorry about that. 【参考例文】 Dear Sir/Madam, You ordered a C1530 camera yesterday, but we find we do not have any now. We are sorry about that. However, we have another model—the C1533. I’d like to tell you something about it. The C1533 is made in 2013. It is newer than the C1530. Its screen size is 3 inches too. It has more colours, such as golden, red and black. But it is ￥1,158— more expensive than the C1530. Would you like to buy it? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Mary Smith An email about monitors C4091 C4095 How big 17 inches 19 inches How heavy 5 kg 4 kg How much 1,200 1,298 How many we have sold this month 38 50 Top Office found that they did not have any C4091 monitors, so Tom Green, a salesman, wrote an email to Mabel Wang. Look at the table and complete Tom’s emails to Mabel. To: Mabel Wang From: Tom Green Dear Ms Wang, You ordered a C4091 monitor yesterday. I am afraid we do not have any now. However, we have another model —the C4095. __________________________________ __________________________________ _____________________ Would you like to order a C4095? I look forward to your reply. Best wishes, Tom Green The C4095 is a 19-inch monitor, so