把脉雅思写作MartinLiu.ppt

“把脉”雅思写作 “Diagnose” IELTS Writing “Doctor”：Martin Liu Four Questions How is your writing? What is wrong? Where is the way? Why join SEG training? How is your writing? What is Wrong? “内容”不切题 (Content) “思路”不清晰 (Structure) “语言”不规范 (Language) Task Fulfillment Coherence and cohesion Vocabulary and Sentence Structure What is Wrong? The university should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give students more practical training. Do you agree with this statement? Where is the way? “内容”不切题 (Content) “思路”不清晰 (Structure) “语言”不规范 (Language) 了解题型,积累素材 善于分析,掌握技巧 增加词汇,熟悉句型 处方1:了解题型,积累素材 观点类(Opinion) 辩论式(Argument) 讨论式(Discussion) 报告式 (Report) What is your opinion? Do you agree? Discuss the two opinions. How to solve the problem? 观点类(Opinion) With computer technology becoming cheaper and more accessible, more adults work from home and more children study from home. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? （2011.3.19） We are surrounded by all kinds of advertising, which significantly influence our lives. Do the positive effects of advertising outweigh its negative effects? （2011.6.25） 辩论式(Argument) Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?（2011.5.7） In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is has negative effects on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree? （2011.6.23） 讨论式(Discussion) Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.（2012.1.12） Some people think young people should follow traditions of the society, while other pe