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PAGE \* MERGEFORMAT 7 2017 高考英语作文： 你是××中学的××，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，已在校园网发布方案，征求师生的修改意见。你需要写一封邮件，包含以下两点： 提出你觉得需要改进的地方； 需要改进的原因。 主题 发现上海 时间 5月1日（周日）下午3点 路线 从人民广场经过南京路到外滩（the Bund），全程徒步，之后再徒步原路返回人民广场。 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m really excited to heat that a hiking activity is going to be held near the Bund on the Labor Day holiday. However, there may be further improvement of the scheme you’ve posted on the campus website, as I’d like to point out. First of all, the hike needs to be planned in more detail as the information released online appears to be too general. As participants, we need to know how long the hike will last. Also, we are willing to have a clearer picture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the activity. After all, the scheme should be comprehensive and thoughtful enough to ensure the success of the activity. Only by clarifying these details, are you likely to attract more attention from the students. What’s more, I suggest the hike be more suited to the theme “Discover Shanghai” through additional activities. Upon arrival at the Bund, I propose an introduction of the architecture on both sides of the Huangpu River. By appreciating different artistic styles of the buildings, we can gain a deeper insight into the authentic Shanghai culture mixed with exotic flavor. Thus, the experience may well be unforgettable one, because it not only makes us move, but also enables us to discover the scenic beauty of Shanghai, which will well achieve the purpose of organizing the activity. All in all, if the hike is organized in more detail and in a more supportive way, it is sure to succeed. I hope that my voice above can be heard and considered and wish the activity a great success. Yours sincerely Wang Lei 2016 高考英语作文： 假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参与了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须： 1.描述调研数据； 2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。 Recently I have conducted a survey about “whether parents are proud of their children” in my school. The resu