《723日苹中讲座》-课件设计（公开）.pptVIP

并列句； and， but， or， for，when，while 复合句 状语从句 三大从句 定语从句 主语从句 名词性从句 宾语从句 表语从句 表语从句 不是语句好就一定高分，但没有好语句就一定不是高分，但好语句不是造句造出来的，而是反复用用出来的 开放作文观点最重要，立意要准确，但不要太语文，不要太牵强，不要标新立异，大众最好 不是范文一定有用，但没有范文一定不行。范文对有些人是拐杖，但对另一些人，也可以成为大树本身 扬长的前提是养长，尝试培养每一个学生最基本的语言优势 语言能力提高要综合全面，常用词汇、常用结构的综合运用 * 词数为减去首、尾句所给词数之后的数字。句数不包括已给出的首、尾句。 * * * 书面表达：用英语去表达的能力。 * * 试评 * * * * * 仿写是在写作教学中的方法之一。 北京对写作的评价，要看内容第一位，不因写出复合句等加分。 * * 短文与诗歌是有差异的。不鼓励诗歌。 * * 短文与诗歌是有差异的。不鼓励诗歌。 * * build ：shape and size (of the human body) * 学好、学扎实，为并列句和复合句的学习打好基础 As is shown in the picture, there are two buildings, and there is a tree between them. The tree is tall but bent. And there is a big sun in the sky. I think the picture tries to tell us that when we do something , we should find a great way. We should know what is suit us. If not, we will live difficultly, just like the tree in the picture, if choose the wrong place to live, so it bent, and it is difficult to live long. So I thing before we do something, we should think whether this way is suit us carefully, if we decited, we can’t regret. If we do everything carefully, our life will be more beautiful. （7分）对图画的描述与阐述之间缺乏紧密和有机的逻辑联系，论述部分的逻辑有些混乱，语言错误较多，未恰当完成任务。 As can be seen in the picture, there is a tall but bend tree grewing between the two bend buildings. And there is a sun shining them strongly. There is something we should give thought to. What the picture wants to convey to us is that many parents give too much care and protection to their children. They don’t want their children to face press or challenge. But they don’t realize that if children live in the “comfortable” environment, they won’t grow healthily and smoothly, just like the tree in the picture. As far as I am concerned, parents should give more free space to children to grow and let them face more challenge. Only in this way, can children make greater progress and grow healthily. （7分）虽然篇幅很长，但上下文逻辑比较混乱，图画的描述和阐述之