高三写作指导前-讲座.pptVIP

Guidance on writing;;如何算是一篇好的文章？;书面表达六步法;; 2.3：??抓、遣： 列要点（关键词——动词或动词词组） 遣词造句 4.???? 连： (1) 扩词成句。在书写时，若无把握的情况下尽量用简单的句子、单词或短语表达。 (2) 组句成文（开头结尾、增添细节、行文连贯、高级结构），并呈现常用承接、过渡词语。思路清晰，逻辑严密。 ;假定你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括： 1. 乐观的人生态度； 2. 努力学习； 3. 参加体育锻炼 ;Example: To grow up happily and healthily We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.? Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power. We can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily. ;Practice;分 析; 2、Good eating habits ①all kinds of food, ②the same amount and at the same time ; 高级:Some of the students go to school without breakfast;;选好词，写好句 ;成文;food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad eating habits will surely do harm to our health. To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fruit,fish,meat,vegetables as well as main food. Besides, we’d better have meals regularly. ; In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better. That’s all. Thank you.; 一句多译练习 例一 . 写请假条。情景：我生病了，明天不能上学。; 6. Being ill, I can’t go to school tomorrow. (用分词作原因状语) 7. I can’t go to school tomorrow. That’s because I’m ill. （用表语从句） 8. I’m seriously ill, which makes me unable to go to school. （用定语从句） 9. I’m seriously ill, which makes it impossible for me to go to school.;10. It is because I’m ill that I can’t go to school tomorrow.(