lecture 1英语写作中的遣词、造句及句子润色文库.pptVIP

* 插入语的作用主要有两个： 一个是突出主语，比如说： He, who would like to play basketball, is a good student. 第二个作用是解释说明，比如说： People, especially students, should work hard. Internet, the most pervasive modern technology, which has penetrated into people‘s lives a decade ago (which has marked rapid change and innovation in the means of communication), has great impact on both our life-style and our thought. 网络是最普遍的现代技术，它十年前就进入我们的生活，它对我们的生活方式和思维都有很大的影响。 （2）inversion 倒装 　　倒装是我们写作中需要用到的。虽然略显俗套，但是却是很能满足阅卷人的主观感受的。 常用的倒装形式有以下几种： ??????? Only + 时间状语? Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beautiful future. ?????? Only + 介词词组???? Only by planning his time carefully can he improve efficiency and make achievements. Only in this way can we master the writing skills step by steps. ?????? ? 否定词位于句首（hardly when; never; not only---,but also---; seldom）? 在我一生当中很难遇到这样的人 ?Seldom in my life have I met such a kind-hearted man.? ?地点方位名词位于句首 In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games. Follow-up Exercise: Use inversion in sentence-making 充满着风险与机遇的改革的新时代正向我们走来. Now on coming to us is the new era of reform full of ventures and chances。 3、figure of speech 修辞 　　无论是汉语写作还是英语写作，修辞其实非常的重要。它是作者写作功底具体事例的展现。所谓修辞包括比喻、拟人、排比等等。这里仅举一个比喻例子，还是拿“重要的”来举例。当你用完词组之后，如果你用上下面句子，则文章就会显得神采飞扬呢？ Most students will put it in that way: 　　 The bicycle is important for us. The bicycle is of importance for us. The bicycle plays an important role in our life. Now can you upgrade the sentence？ 用同位语（上义词）做插入语进行改造 2. 用修辞，比如比喻改造 The bicycle, environmental friendliness vehicle, plays an important role in our life. The bicycle is like the air, water, and sunshine and cannot be parted with a moment in our life. 　 parenthesis Simile 明喻 the air, water, and sunshine 四六级、雅思写作中常见修辞1 结合四六级写作考试来看，大家经常喜欢表达这样一句话：A对B很重要。那么这样一句看似天真无邪的话用英语怎么表达呢？ 对，没错，遥远的地方传来了一声A is important to B。 这