作文2015.pptVIP

Everyone needs to eat and live. Without food, people will die.So food saftety is much more important than anything else in peoples life. But what should we do to make sure what we eat is safe? As far as I am concerned, first of all, we are supposed to keep food safety in mind all the time and pay more attention to what we eat. We must refuse to eat unhealthy food, such as fast food, drinks and so on. Besides what we eat, we should also care about where we eat and how we eat. As students, we are supposed to eat mostly in the dinning hall instead of outisde. If possible , we need to eat at home. The food at home or in the dining hall is much cleaner and fresher . Whats more , we should try our best to eat cooked food rather than raw food so that we can keep * * 审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。如果审不清主题，就有可能出现“下笔千言，离题万里”的情况。 在审清主题的基础上，还需注意要审清文体。 审题不准, 丢要点, 失分惨重。 例1: A special gift I’m looking forward to 强调这份“礼物”是“我所期待的”， 而非我已拥有的一份礼物。 如果匆忙动笔就容易将文章写成 “My favorite gift”. 例2: I want to do something for my school I—— the first person——person want to —— the simple future tense —— Tense Something —— one thing —— Key words For my school —— purpose 例3：学校的 “English center” 是同学们练习英语的场所。这里的 “teenager hotline” 每天都能收不到不少同学的咨询电话。作为热线的一名志愿者，请你根据当时的记录，首先描述两位同学遇到的问题，然后给一位同学提出具体建议并说明原因。 主要内容：问题、建议、原因 限制：描述两位同学的问题，给一位同学提建议 关键词：problem、suggestion、reason 1.定内容。 2.定时态。 记叙文、日记常用一般过去时； 说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用一般现在时； 计划等用一般将来时。 3.定人称。 用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。 4.定句型、定词语。 应依据内容,先定句型后定词语。 写文章之前列提纲可以使杂乱无章的材料变得井然有序；列提纲可以使同学们的作文紧扣主题不跑题。列提纲时不必过于详细，可以根据题目要求，考虑你的文章分几段，或者分几个层次，每段的大意是什么,计划好文章的整体结构。 列提纲 Middle 正文 Ending 结尾 concluding sentence 结论句 对全文的总结和概括。 supporting sentences支持句 用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 topic sentence 主题句 说出文中的要点、核心问题。 Beginning 开头 英语记叙文的写作的方式 例1：利弊型作文——Microblog的利与弊 Para1: （综述）with the development of internet… more and more popular… Para2: （利）First, convenient, anywhere, any time; Second, share… with…; Last, express views free, money-free… Para3: （弊）However, each coin has two sides. On the o