高一上学期月考作文分析.pptVIP

* Writing Common mistakes: 信的格式------未署名或署错名（不能出现自己的名字） 位置错 Yours, Li Hua Yours, Li Hua 2. 涂改较多，卷面不整洁 (可事先打草稿） 3.时态前后不一致 如：Yesterday we hold… 4.单复数前后不一致1). The people who loves me 2). a adults 3).a people 5.单词拼写错误 1).yesterday 2). First 3).be proud of 6.其他错误 1). I was very exciting. 2).thank for our teacher 3). In order to me ,they work hard. held Class 7 Grade 1 Dear Tom, It’s great to receive your email. I should have written to you yester- day, but I was really very busy. The school held a grown-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first, we made an oath that we were no longer children, we should make contribution to our country from then on. And I couldn’t hold back my tears because I was think- ing about all the people who cared about me. If we hadn’t got enough love from them, we couldn’t grow up so well. So we should thank our parents and teachers for their hard work. Then our teachers gave us cards wishing us a better future. With the cards in hands, we were all moved with tears in our eyes. Not only we but also our parents speak highly of the teachers, and I’ll work hard and won’t let them down. The ceremony was over with our wonderful performances. All of us took an active part in activities, such as dancing and singing. And we all lost ourselves in the beautiful music. I hope you can write to me and share your feelings with me, too. Yours, Li Hua