如何润色英语作文.ppt

态度决定一切 如果将英文字母A到Z分别编上1—26的顺号（A=1，B=2，……Z=26），??? 那么，你将会发现以下的现象：?????Hard work = 98 Knowledge = 96 　Love = 54 Luck = 47 这些平常我们非常看重的因素，都不能得到圆满的100分。 那么究竟什么能得到满分？是?Money（金钱）吗？抑或是Leadership（领导能力）？ 可是计算的结果：Money（金钱）= 72，Leadership（领导能力）= 89。 在找寻了无数的英文单词后，终于找到了满分的答案，它就是：? Attitude（态度）=100。 THANKS FOR YOUR ATTENTION! * 如何润色英语作文 高考作文的核心任务： 在15秒内取悦阅卷老师 优秀高考作文应具备的六个基本特征： 1、层次不乱 2、句式多变 3、亮点若干 4、巧妙串联 5、蠢错不犯 6、整洁卷面 作文上光第一招： 肃清愚蠢语言错误 Last summer I go to America and studied at a language school. I had many wonderful experience, but I also had a sad one. One day, the school held party, where I invited to talk about Tianjin. After that they asked me a lot of things about China. But I couldn’t explain them with English clearly. I felt sadly. I learnt a lesson from this experience. I have already studied English for eight years, I can’t use it very good. I must work hard to improve my spoken English so that I will not be able to communicate freely with foreigners. I hope I can be a bridge between China and others countries in the future. ∧ ∧ ∧ 作文上光第二招： 让句式多变起来 作文上光第三招： 适当使用复杂句 主从复合句 虚拟语气 倒装句 强调句 非谓语动词结构 并列句 作文上光第四招： 巧妙使用连接成分 作文上光第五招： 有选择地背诵经典句型 作文上光第六招： 尽量使用高中词汇 作文上光第七招： 要害部位使用名言、谚语 作文上光第八招： 无招胜有招 No pains, no gains! More pains, more gains! 细节决定成败 *