英语书面表达的润色.pptVIP

英语书面表达的润色 句式的多样 选词特色 关联词的使用 合理的想象和发挥 《高考英语科考试说明》中第五档（21~25分）的给分范围和要求 覆盖所有内容要点； 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇； 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言应用能力； 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的。 全、准、顺 、雅 一、复杂多样的句式 复合句 倒装句 强调结构 非谓语 感叹句 虚拟语气 独立主格结构、反意问句、并列句、名言、警句等 2004年广州一模的书面表达为例 假设你是某中学生英文报的小记者，对中学生课外上网的利弊进行调查采访。以下是学生们对上网的看法。请你根据他们的观点写一篇简要的调查报告，并呼吁正确使用互联网。 使用互联网的益处1、资源丰富2、节省时间3、方便交流和沟通 使用互联网的弊端1、内容良莠不齐2、沉迷网络游戏会影响学业3、过多使用会影响健康 1．各种复合句 1）There’s no doubt that the Internet does us good. 2) The majority of students believe that they benefit a lot from the Internet. 3) As is known to all, once addicted to the online games, the students no longer concentrate on their studies. 4) Helpful as the computer is, some still stick to the opinion that not everything on the internet is good for us students. 2. 倒装句 1) Never before could we be exposed to so much information with just a click. 2) Only with great care and under proper guidance will the students improve their studies and enjoy making new friends by surfing the internet. 3) With the increasing popularity and convenience that the internet brings, there arises the argument over its bad effects on teenagers. 4) Presented as follows is the result of a recent survey on how students view the Internet. 3. 强调结构 1) It is the internet that makes the world much smaller. 2) Isn’t is the internet that provides people with a more convenient way of communication? 3) The internet does enable people to communicate with each other more easily and quickly. 4. 非谓语 1） We should try to make proper use of the computer, making it a good partner that benefits our life as well as our study. 2) Being absorbed in the games, students may have difficulty in controlling themselves, leaving their homework undone. 5. 感叹句 1) How hard some students find it to tear themselves away from computer games！ 2) How convenient it is to use the computer! 6. 虚拟语气 1）As more and more students stay up surfing the internet，it is high time that we discussed the p