英语人教版九年级全册初中英语书面表达写作指导.pptVIP

初中英语书面表达 写作技巧指导 巩义二中附中 魏亚洁 中考作文评分标准 第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（1-3分） 只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。 健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。 作文练习 travel stay at home visit friends or parents work travel Stay at home visit friends or parents work 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 写作第一步 审 健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。 审 travel stay at home visit friends or parents work Health is very important. How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. Last Sunday , I asked some students about what they did on vacation. 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。 列 写作第二步 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点 如何度假 调查报告 倡议假日休闲 stay at home work visit friends or parents travel A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation. 列 加 加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。 写作第三步： A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. a nice head a nice tail a nice body How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well. 连 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。 写作第四步： 1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, 2.表示选择: or, 3.表示转折: but, however, though, 4.表示因果: because, so, 5.表示条件: if ,unless 6.表示解释: for example, such as, that is to say, 7.表示顺序: first ,second, third, f