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My editing checklist作文“美颜”清单曾岑 重庆广益中学CONTENTSONETWOTHREEONE16-18分（优）11-15分（良）6-10分（中）0-5分（差）完全完成了试题规定的任务较好完成了试题规定的任务基本完成了试题规定的任务未完成了试题规定的任务1.有足够的要点或充足的理由。1.有足够的要点或充足的理由。1.有一些要点或部分理由。1.几乎未涉及要点或写的内容与主题无关。2.准确使用了丰富的词汇和语言结构。2.恰当地使用了丰富的词汇和语言结构2.词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求。2.词汇和语言结构错误较多。3.全文结构紧凑，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，具备较强的语言能力。3.适当运用了语句间的连接成分，较好地达到了交际的目的。3.文章不够连贯，影响对写作呢绒的理解。3.内容不连贯，无法传达有效信息。中考作文评分标准 When I heard “learn”, I would say that’s my work that I do every day. As we all know, learning is very important to us. It can makes us understand the world. It can also make us feel satisfy. Sandy, a friend of mine, always gets good grades when we have some exam. She still work hard. She wants to learn more about the world. she thinks one of the main reasons is that “learn” is the happiest thing. It reminds me that I need to learn as hard as she. I hope I can try my best to achieve my dream. Learning can help us make the world colorful. The more things we learn, the happier we will be.A piece writing from a studentDo you think this piece of writing is good enough? Why or why not?TOW My Editing Checklist（作文“美颜”清单）How to make the writing better?Step1. Did I re-read my writing to better the layout（布局）? A better layout can make the writing more clear.introduction引入Paragraph 1details细节Basic layout基本结构Paragraph 2conclusion总结Paragraph 3How to make the writing better?When I heard “learn”, I would say that’s my work that I do every day. As we all know, learning is very important to us. It can makes us understand the world. It can also make us feel satisfy. Para. 1 introduction Sandy, a friend of mine, always gets good grades when we have some exam. She still work hard. She wants to learn more about the world. she thinks one of the main reasons is that “learn” is the happiest thing. It reminds me that I need to learn as hard as she. I hope I can try my best to achieve my dream. Para. 2 details Learning can help us make the world colorful. The more things we learn, the happier we will be.Para