英语人教版九年级全册初中英语中考复习课--书面表达.pptVIP

初中英语中考复习课-----书面表达 武汉市蔡家湾中学 吉尚军 知彼知己百战不殆----熟悉武汉中考评分标准 如何写好英语书面表达呢? 一.写好句子 1、句子要正确。 2、句子要平行。 3、句子要连贯。 4、句子要有逻辑性。 5、句子要避免过多重复。 6、句子要避免头重脚轻。 7、句子要避免汉式英语。 二.写好段落 三.用好过渡词 四.写好开头和结尾 一.写好句子 1.句子要正确：1).Do you know where is the People’s Park ?（?） 2). There are many visitors enjoy the dish. （?） →Many visitors enjoy the dish. （√） →There are many visitors who  enjoy the dish. （√） →Do you know where the People’s  Park is? （√） 2.句子要平行 In my spare time, I enjoy popular music and collecting stamps. （?） →In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. （√） 3.句子要连贯 Go into the park. Go forward. Cross the street. Turn right. （?） →After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight till you come to a street. Cross the street and turn right. （√） 4.句子要有逻辑性 I’m very interested in computer and won first prize last year. （?） →I was very interested in computer and won first prize last year. （√） 5.句子要避免过多重复. You will continue to walk. You’ll see a hill. You will go around the hill. You’ll get to a lake. （?） →After walking for a while, you’ll come to a hill, walk around to the other side of the hill. There you’ll see a lake. （√） 6.句子要避免头重脚轻Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer are the main subjects. （?） →The main subjects are Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer. （√） 7.句子要避免汉式英语My spare lovers are swimming, skating, collecting stamps and listening to popular music.（?） →In my spare time, I’m fond of swimming,…… （√） →In my spare time, my hobbies are swimming, skating…… （√） →In my spare time, I enjoy swimming, skating…… 二.写好段落  段落本身又是一篇小短文,包括主题句、支持句和结尾句。 Follow your school rules and enjoy your school life. No rules, no standards 无规矩不成方圆 Follow your family rules and enjoy your family life. Let’s guess her family