2019版高考英语一轮复习精选题辑：写作专练（八）.docxVIP

写作专练(八) 写作(共两节，满分35分) 第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) (2017～2018·洛阳市上学期尖子生第一次联考) When I was in primary school，I watched a movie about global warming.See the images of ice melting and the polar bears habitat being destroyed made me disappointed.I begin to realize it was important to do what we can save the environment.I asked my mom to buy a blue recycling bin.And she immediate agreed to get it.Besides，she got for me a black one for trash.I now have a recycling bin for waste papers and plastic bottles in my room.I may be just one person，so I feel like I am making the big difference. 【答案】 When I was in primary school，I watched a movie about global warming.eq \o(See,\s\do10(Seeing)) the images of ice melting and the polar eq \o(bears,\s\do10(bears)) habitat being destroyed made me disappointed.I eq \o(begin,\s\do10(began)) to realize it was important to do what we can eq \o(∧,\s\do10(to)) save the environment.I asked my mom to buy a blue recycling bin.And she eq \o(immediate,\s\do10(immediately)) agreed to get eq \o(it,\s\do10(one)).Besides，she got me a black one for trash.I now have a recycling bin for waste eq \o(papers,\s\do10(paper)) and plastic bottles in my room.I may be just one person，eq \o(so,\s\do10(but/yet)) I feel like I am making eq \o(the,\s\do10(a)) big difference. 第一处：See改为Seeing。考查非谓语动词。看到那些冰融化和北极熊的栖息地遭受破坏的影像，“我”感到失望。此处应用动名词短语作主语，故将See改为Seeing。 第二处：bears改为bears。考查名词所有格。此处指北极熊的栖息地，故此处应用名词的所有格bears。 第三处：begin改为began。考查动词的时态。此处叙述的事发生在“我”上小学的时候。故用一般过去时，将begin改为began。 第四处：save前加to。考查非谓语动词。“我”开始意识到为了拯救环境，去做我们能够做的事情是重要的。此处用动词不定式表示目的，故在save前加to。 第五处：immediate改为immediately。考查副词。母亲立即答应购买一个。此处修饰动词应用副词，故用immediately。 第六处：it改为one。考查代词。上文中的“a blue recycling bin”为泛指，故此处用表示泛指的代词one。 第七处：删除got后的for。考查介词。get sb.sth.“给某人某物”为固定搭配，故此处删除for。 第八处：papers改为paper。考查名词。waste paper表示“废纸”，为不可数名词，故将papers改为paper。 第九处：so改为but/yet。考查连词。虽然“我”仅仅是一个人，但“我”感觉“我”做的事情意义重大。根据句意可知前后形成转折关系，故此处改为but/yet。 第十处：the改为a。考查冠词。make a big difference表示“有重大影响，意义重大”，故将the改为a。 第二节　书面表达(满分25分) (2018·沈阳市下学期高三