书面-书写能力.ppt

近年来，随着计算机的普及，越来越多的人的书写能力明显退化了，甚至有很多汉字都不会写。为了号召大家重视书写，保护民族传统文化，请写一篇文章向校报投稿。要求包括以下要点： 1. 简要介绍人们书写能力退化这一现象； 2. 阐述书写的重要性并号召同学们提高书写能力。 文章结构： 第一部分：描述现象【简要】（近年来，随着计算机的普及，越来越多的人的书写能力明显退化了，甚至有很多汉字都不会写。） 第二部分：阐述重要性【要有说服力，创新性】（书写艺术是传统文化之一；给人留下好印象等。） 第三部分：发起号召【总结全文，简明扼要】 问题： 文体有误，不是书信，是投稿 拼写 writing handwriting 审题有误（本文讲述书写的重 要性，无关汉字、写作等） 文章布局不合理 看清题意，构思写些什么内容 并列句之间无连词连接 … more and more people come to face the weakening of their writing ability, even some are unable to write a lot of Chinese words. (∧and) → … the weakening of their writing ability, some even unable to write a lot of Chinese words. (独立主格结构) 现象及原因分析 问题： 逻辑不严谨 … even they are unable to write a lot of Chinese words. → … even they are unable to write a lot of Chinese words correctly. Firstly, handwriting plays a great role in Chinese culture. As a Chinese, it is our responsibility to write correctly and well. → Firstly, handwriting plays a great role in Chinese culture. Improving our handwriting is a way to preserve our unique culture. 说理不具说服力 开头范例： With the popularity of computers, people tend to type with a keyboard rather than write with a pen, resulting in the worsening of their handwriting. Some are even unable to write characters correctly. Nowadays, on account of too much dependence on computers, there exists a sharp decline in people’s handwriting. Worse still, some people even fail to write characters correctly. As computers become more and more popular, people become poorer and poorer at handwriting, some even unable to write characters correctly, which has aroused much public concern. 书写重要性的合理原因 1. traditional culture: symbol, stand for, represent, pass down, be proud of 2. a useful skill in our daily life: leave a good impression, help us stand out in the competitive society benefit from, … 3. an art: make life abundant and colorful, enjoy the inner beauty 4. bring out / reflect one’s personality / character 理由陈述范例： Handwriting, regarded