高考写作专题--2015书面表达分析.ppt

By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.（主题句） First and foremost, I would do a part- time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.（拓展1） Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.（拓展2） Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.（拓展三） 　　These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.（以合理的客套话结尾） 三学会使用较高级的词汇 Which is better? 1 周末我们会有很多作业要做. A We have endless homework to do at the weekend. B We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend . 2 在我所有的老师里,毛老师给我留下了很深的印象. A Of all my teachers, I still remember Mr Moore. B Of all my teachers, Mr Moore gave me the deepest impression. 3 高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。 A. His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very tired. B. His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very exhausted. 4. 他没听我课上讲的东西。 A He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class. B He didn’t listen to what I said in the class. 使用多种句子结构 If she is compared with other teachers , we find she pays more attention to her way of teaching.(状语) Compared with other teachers , she pays more attention to his way of teaching. 2 You should keep silent at the meeting unless you are invited to speak. (连词+分词) Unless invited , you should keep silent at the meeting . 3　He didn’t realize his foolishness until he returned home.(倒装/强调) Not until he returned home did he realize his foolishness It was not until he returned home that he realized his foolishness. 4 We can achieve a satisfying grade by changing the way we study. (only倒装) . 5 How should we protect eyesight? It still remains a question among us.(主语从句) 6 We should emphasize the importance of protecting our eyesight.(can’t …too much) Only by changing the way we study can we achieve a satisfying grade. How to protect our eyesight still remains a question among us.