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Yishang mingtian shang ke yong 写作中复合句常见的错误 基础写作7大聚焦 4， 巧用同位语及分词短语，让表达简洁生动，顺畅合并信息。 合并以下信息 时间：上周last week 事件：采访王教授， 关注中国在校儿童近 视问题 have an interview with; concern; the issue of short- sightedness; school children 背景：王教授是眼科医生 eye-doctor 同位语的应用 同位成分，往往是中心强调的信息。 He finally gave me his present, a beautiful dress. 当同位成分之间存在某种语义关系是，会见到表示该语义的词语，如： 同等关系： that is, in other words, namely 列举关系： for example, for instance, such as, including, included. 突出或强调关系： especially, particularly, mainly, mostly, in particular 范文解读 评分标准 评分标准总结 1 具有很好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性高 2 包括了所有信息内容 3 内容连贯，而且结构紧凑。 基础写作的推荐步骤： 1、认真审题,读懂中文提示 2、归纳、排列信息点 3、确定时态、短语和句型、连词成句 4、组句成篇(特别要写好第一句话） 5、检查修改 * Last week, we had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye-doctor, concerning the issue of short-sightedness of school children in china. Here are 3 ways to make sentences: I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句： 1)借助名词短语做同位语 如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生；籍贯：广东。 Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1986. 1、五年的基础写作范文中都使用了非谓语形式。 1）Born on March7,1915, Allan Stewart…(2012) 2）A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother … （2011） 3) Around 540million people are affected…,causing 100,000 deaths.(2010) 4)…half of the school children in our country are shortsighted, ranking the first in the world. (2009) 5) Shooting, originated as a means of survival, … (2008) 2、五年的基础写作范文中都使用了定语从句。 1） … Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor at Yale, who tells stories in her book about ... （2011 年） 2）There are 350 million people smoking recently, in which the male hold 75 percent ... （2010 年） 3） It is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks the first in the world, are short-sighted.（2009 年） 4）In his eighties, he decided to study law, after which he obtained…in 2006.(2012) 3、五年的基础写作范文中常使用了同位语。 1） … Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor at Yale... （2011 年） 2） I had an interview with ProfessorWang, an eye -doct