新课程高中英语写作教学.pptVIP

1．由简单句扩展成并列句 Tom is our monitor now. He came to our school last year. → Tom came to our school last year and he is our monitor now. (把意义松散的两个句子合为一体，句意连贯性更强了) → Tom came to our school last year; he is our monitor now. (通过标点符号也能达到异曲同工之效) 活动三： 句子扩展（1） 2．由简单句扩展成复合句 例如：The meeting came to an end. 我们试加一个定语从句： 1, The meeting --------------------------came to an end. 我们试加一个状语从句： 2, -------------------, the meeting came to an end. (When 引导的 时间状语从句） 3,The meeting came to an end .---------------------- (Though 引导的让步状语从句） 4 -------------------------------, the meeting came to an end.(Before引导的时间状语从句） 句子扩展（2） that they held in our classroom When we arrived though it was still early Before I could speak anything 并列：and, as well as, also, both…and等； 选择：or, either…or, neither...nor, otherwise 等； 原因：because, for, as, since, owing to, due to 等； 结果：so, therefore, thus, as a result 等； 运用连词或介词，提高文章的连贯性 时间：when, before, later, first, and then, next 等； 比较：on the contrary, for another thing 等 转折：but, yet, however, although, in spite of 等； 递进：besides, even, what’s more, in addition等； 举例：for example, such as, like, namely 等 总结：in short, in general, in a word, to sum up等。 活动四， 加连接词 Tom saw a bird. The bird was wounded. He took the bird to the zoo. The workers in the zoo praised him. He arrived home late. He was happy. →Tom saw a wounded bird，---- he took it to the zoo. The workers in the zoo praised him. ------ he came home late, he was happy. so Though Sept 5:习作评讲，质检一短文写作（满分25分） 请你根据你生活中的一个事例用英语写一篇短文，谈谈诚信（honesty)的作用。 Honesty means always talking the truth and never cheating .Honesty is a kind of courage and responsibility ,an invisible power and wealth.Honesty wins trust ,respect and friendship .So it pays to be honest . 注意：1，无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； 2，内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例； 3，文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校姓名； 4，词数100左右 怎样写这篇文章呢？ 一，（1）内容要点；生活中的事例。 （2）题材； 叙述与 记事相结合。 （3）基本时态；一般现在