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坚哥万岁hard-working man has no girl friend Writting part 1. maps personal interpretation Integration organization Structure Grammar Range of Vocabulary The image below shows a town called Milton that has different features from 1980 to 2005. Please summarise and compare information between two pictures. 我在批改网的分数 明显高富帅级别的 以前的屌丝样子 peer editing 大家一起来找茬 We are given information about the differences of the city construction which named Milton over the 25 years by the two maps blow. 我修改的 We are given information by two maps about the differences of a city which named Milton varied significantly over the 25 years. 定语从句 1. How town called Milton was changed which possess distinguished feature over 25 years period 我修改的 How town called Milton which was changed over 25 years’ periods possessed distinguished feature over 25 years period. 定语从句 2.The majority of many constructions had removed or established in the town. 我修改的 The majority of constructions had removed or established in the town. 3.At present, the trees near the hospital which are reduced. (本意想说树木减少) 我修改的 At present, the trees near the hospital were reduced. 只有两个动词的情况下才用定语从句 4.The parking center is built near the forest. However, the houses are changed to stadium. 我修改的 The parking centers were built near the forest, moreover, the housing area in the northeast was changed to a stadium. 5.The country in present has changed a lot obviously 6. They live in a building which can increase their attitude with each other. 我修改的 They lived in pleasant accommodation which can improve their standard of living. the relationship in the neighbourhood can be enhanced in the form of living in the same building 7. Trees are decrease which unhealthy to us. 我修改的 The number of tress decreased, which caused an unhealthy environment to us. As we can see from the maps, not only the hospital which lay on the north-west, the school that stood in the middle blow the river and the airport where it located in the south