写作及课文语言点.ppt

Writing analysis;Problems;Organization;Contents; Topic: Human conquest of nature;Language;Examples;The amount of nature resource that occupied by human is more and more, the speed is faster and faster. The ground sea of India in 2004 and the earthquake of Wenchuan in 2008 which has caused great loses in both lives and prosperities. They are many pictures about nature disasters often appear in my mind. Yangtze river has appeared serious flooding many times. 改：Serious floods appeared in Yangtze river many times 注：appear为不及物动词，且原句主谓逻辑有误。;2. Writing homework;Sample1;; For me, I approve of the second viewpoint. In the face of the raw, bleak Russian winter, even the intelligent Emperor of the French have to retreat in panic. Even the firm building will collapse when the earthquake come. These show that our human beings can’t overcome nature. So we human beings should get along with the nature peacefully. (174 words) ;Sample 2; On one hand, someone consider that man can triumph over nature in a proper way. Looking back to history, man always fight against nature by seeking for a way to shelter from disasters, even making use of the original power of nature in human beings’ favor. For example, man had conquered nature several times such as the Wen Chuan earthquake happening in 2008 in the way of rebuilding the homes gathering all the strength together. What’s more, many tools have been designed to keep us out of hazards due to the highly developing technologies.; On the other hand, it’s a belief that the forces of nature are powerful and we hardly have any ideas coping with such an unexpected problem. Natural disasters, such as drought, tsunamis, hurricanes, typhoons, and earthquakes, still plague the world, and the solutions which scientists found out can only relieve the problems but are still far from solving them on the whole. And the big earthquake that happened in Japan several days ago has apparently made a good evidence of this opin