写作及课文语言点.pptVIP

Writing analysis;Problems;Organization;Contents; Topic: Human conquest of nature;Language;Examples;The amount of nature resource that occupied by human is more and more, the speed is faster and faster. The ground sea of India in 2004 and the earthquake of Wenchuan in 2008 which has caused great loses in both lives and prosperities. They are many pictures about nature disasters often appear in my mind. Yangtze river has appeared serious flooding many times. 改：Serious floods appeared in Yangtze river many times 注：appear为不及物动词，且原句主谓逻辑有误。;2. Writing homework;Sample1;; For me, I a