初中英语写作(1).pptVIP

作文评分标准 五档 16-20 覆盖所有的内容要点；运用了较多的词汇和语法结构；有效地使用了语言间的连接成分，且表达清楚，书写规范，达到预期的写作目标。如果有小错误是因为运用复杂结构所致。 四档 12-15 覆盖主要内容；语法结构和词汇方面基本准确，能满足写作的任务要求，虽有少数错误，但不影响理解，且书写规范。 三档 8-11 内容基本上被覆盖，但句子不连贯，语法错误较多，字数不足50. 二档 4-7 能围绕话题写出几个简单的句子。 一档 0-3 不写或抄写与内容无关的句子或短语不得分，若能写出一与话题有关的此或短语给1-2分。 第一步 2011遵义英语中考作文 越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？ 请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右) 内容包含： 遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。 别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。 劝父母不能酒后驾车。 你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。 参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线 注：第一段已给出，不计入总数 要点 as a student obey traffic rules walk on the sidewalk or the zebra-crossing go across the street turn green play with…\ play football ask sb to do sth drive after drinking 扩句 obey traffic rules 一句多译 简单句、并列句、复合句的转换运用 用恰当的连词连接，美化句子。 用过渡句将所列句子连接起来，使文章流畅， 层次分明。 关联词练习 He is poor, _____ honest. ______ you ______ she are right. They will have a picnic______ it rains tomorrow. ________ he is badly ill, he still keep on working. _______ subject, she like English best. Do _____ you like. ________________ it can open up people’s eyes, ________________ it also has bad influence on working and studying. 美化句子 You can’t cross the street, after the traffic lights turn green. 过度句练习 The car is a useful invention. It makes our lives more convenient. ……. ___. __________________. It also causes a lot of problems. …… 改写 I always made mistakes in grammar in the past, but now I am not afraid of grammar rules. I study grammar by taking notes. I study it by asking my teacher for help. I study grammar by reading grammar books. I think I become interested in English now. I used to make mistakes in grammar, but now I am not afraid of grammar rules. First of all, I think taking notes is the best way to learn grammar. Secondly I ask my teacher for help when I am in trouble. If I am free, I often study grammar by reading grammar books. As a result, I am becoming better and better in English now. 加首尾，使结构完整。漂亮的首尾 为文章加分。 加自己的观点，使文章内容更丰富。 查 通读全文，