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How to Get Your Composition Advanced 利用构词法知识变换表达手段： e.g. To our surprise, Mr. King refused to remove his cap. We were surprised that Mr. King refused to remove his cap.It was surprising that Mr. King refused to remove his capIt surprised us that Mr. King refused to remove his capWhat surprised us most was that Mr. King refused to remove his capSurprisingly, Mr. King refused to remove his cap * By wu-fajun June 9,2008 改变句子的开头---灵活的奥妙 多种句式---精彩总是在变化中 分词和不定式---极富表现力的表达 过渡词---文章的润滑剂 习语---使你文采飞扬,与众不同 洋味十足--- 话措词 不难的一招---相同的意思用不同的词语 A Student’s version Many students feel it difficult to finish so much homework. Not only do they have classes in school but also do their homework at home. I have heard that some of students stay up until midnight. How hard they are! In my opinion, there are some reasons causing it. On one hand, the teachers consider that the more exercise the students do, the better they will learn . so the teachers ask the poor students to do a good many work. On the other hand, the parents also demand their children that they should do too much homework in order to get their lessons improved. I’m not in favor of taking too much work .The teachers and parents should change their way to bring up their children. ____________ __________ _____ _______ ________ ___________ ________ ______ ______ ________ ________ ______ a great deal of _______ __ / ______ 1. 改变句子的开头方式.不要一味地用主语开头,适当使用状语提前 1).We met at the school gate and went together early in the morning 2). The young man could not help crying when he heard the news. 3) We all Know that internet will help us a lot if we use it properly. Early in the morning, we met in the school gate and went together Hearing the news, the young man couldn’t help crying As is known to us all/As we all know, internet will help us a lot if we use it properly 2.多种句式. 避免在整篇文章中只使用一两个句式,可以灵活运用省略句,强调句,倒装句,主从复句 with独立主格结构 1).My parents pra