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PAGE / NUMPAGES How can we write a good composition(作文)? Class __________ No. ________ Name__________ mark_________ 一、书面表达（本题15分，按五个档次给分） 第一档 (13--15分) 短文内容涵盖所有要点，意思连贯，符合逻辑，无语法错误。 第二档 (10--12分) 短文内容涵盖大部分要点，意思表达基本连贯，符合逻辑，但有一些语法错误。 第三档 (7--9分) 短文内容涵盖大部分要点，但意思表达不够连贯，有较多的语法错误。 第四档 (4--6分) 短文内容只涵盖部分要点，写出2--4个句子，但意思表达不连贯，有较多的语法错误。 第五档 (1--3分) 只写出1--2个句子酌情给分，只写出个别单词，不给分。 内容要点可用不同方式表达，对扣紧主题的适当发挥不予扣分；书写潦草、涂改不清， 酌情扣1--2分。 二、What is a good composition ? “一点”: 有“亮点” .有独到之处。 “二整”: 书写工整,卷面整洁。 “三要”: 数量要达标, 词汇和语法 结构要准确、上下文要连贯。 “四不行”: 漏掉内容不行, 写错体裁不行，用错人称不行，用错时态不行。 Enjoy a good composition欣赏好作文 日前,由教育部,国家体育总局,共青团中央联合举办“全国亿万少年阳光体育运动” 启动仪式,其影响巨大,意义深远.你在本校参加了此项活动,请根据表格中所给信息写一篇英语短文. 内容 感想 1.学校师生收看了启动仪式; 2.开展了一个小时的集体体育活动,如;跑步,做操,打篮球等 1.锻炼有利于强健身体; 2. 运动使大脑休息,学习效率更高. 3. 每天锻炼一小时,幸福生活一辈子. 注意:1.词数80~100 个左右. 2.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数. 3.短文须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐句翻译,可适当加入细节,可适度发挥,使短文通顺,连贯. 4. 文中不得使用真实姓名,校名. 参考词汇： the launching ceremony 启动仪式 build up one’s body strength 强身健体 More effective 效果更好 学生满分范文 “Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” launched on April 29, 2007.The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony . After that, all of us went to the playground. We had different kinds of sports for an hour. Some took part in running, some played basketball and football, and some did exercises. We enjoyed doing sports so much that we all forgot the time. We really had a good time. 三、请你做老师，修改作文。 Dear Chairman, I am a boy student from Class1,Grade 3.I’d like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club.My name is Wang Ling . I’m hard working and I’m in good health.I often help others. And be friendly to classmates. When someone is in trouble, I’ll go and help he or she.I usually help the old people to cross the road.They often say thanks to me. In the bus,I’ll stand