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2020英语（一） 大作文真题精讲 一、2020大作文真题：《2021考研英语高分写作》P.81 Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should, 1）describe the picture briefly, 2）interpret the meaning, and 3）give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points) 习惯 第一段：图画描述 第一句：总体描述 上述漫画中有两位年轻人在困难面前的做法完全不同。 In the portrayals above are two young people behaving completely differently in the face of difficulties. 第二句：描述图一 在左边的漫画中，一位可爱的年轻女士正坐在一张放了 很多书的书桌旁努力学习，并说：“尽早完成才放心”。 In the left cartoon, a lovely young lady is sitting beside a desk with a great many books on it and working hardly, saying, “I will be relieved only if I accomplish my task as soon as possible.” 第三句：描述图二 相反，在右边的漫画中，一位年轻男子懒散地倚靠在沙 发上无所事事，并说：“不到最后不动手”。 On the contrary, in the right drawing, a young man is lying lazily on a sofa and doing nothing, saying, “I will not start my work until the last moment.” 第四句：文字说明 在漫画下面，文字说明显示：“习惯”。 And below the pictures, there is a caption which says : “Habit”. 第二段：意义阐释 第一句：主题句（象征寓意/中心思想） 这两幅漫画的目的是告诉我们，在我们的日常生活中，养成良好的 习惯非常重要。 The intention of the caricatures is to show us that forming good habits is of utmost significance in our daily life. 第二句：分论点二 首先，那些知道如何培养良好习惯的人能够确保有较好的学业成绩。 To begin with, people who know how to form good habits will be able to ensure strong academic performance. 第三句：举例论证 例如，那些把学习任务放在首位，合理安排时间并且避免拖沓的学生 肯定会稳步提高自己的成绩。 As an illustration, those students who prioritize their commitments, schedule their time reasonably and avoid procrastination are certain to make steady gains in their grades. 第四句：分论点二 其次，养成良好的习惯也可以帮助人们增长自信并且保持一种健康的 精神状态。 What is more, forming excellent habits can help us to develop confidence and to maintain a healthy mental state. 第五句：解释论证 换言之，培养良好的习惯在保持人们心理健康、减轻大多数年轻人 在现代生活中产生的压力和焦虑方面起着关键的作用。 In other words, forming good habits can play a key role in keeping us spiritually fit and reducing the pressure and anxiety that accompany modern life for most young people. 第三段：归纳结论 总之，养成良好的习惯在几个方面对我们来说都是必要的，包括帮助