高一英语读后续写作文评讲 .ppt

Continuation Writing 读后续写  成一个完整的故事 One day during the long summer holiday, Mrs. Martins took Brendon and his younger brother and sister to the beach. As soon as they got there, the three children raced down to the sea to try out their new surfboards. They were soon swimming out to the waves and riding back on their boards After a while, Brendon noticed that Kim was floating away from him and his sister. Come back, Kim, he shouted Mum said we have to stick together,Kim put his arms over the side of his board and began paddling (a), but instead of getting closer, he began moving further “ Brendon,help! called Kim: m caught in a rip(离岸流! Brendon quickly paddled over to his brother. Hold on to the back of my board and ill pull you in, Brendon told the frightened boy. But the rip was too strong and soon both Brendon and Kim were moving further from the beach. Kylie, come and help, Brendon yelled to his sister. Soon all three children were floating away from the beach. Its no use fighting, said kylie, We ll just tire ourselves out, We have to stick together and hope the current takes us onto the beach again. For the next 20 minutes, the frightened children held onto each others boards and let the current pull them along. Paragraph 1 I cant even see the beach any more cried Kim Paragraph 2: Thank goodness!cried their mother running up to hug them  注意: 所续写短文的词数应为150左右 2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4读写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。  Read for the form of the story lat s the style of the passage? A. Narration记叙文) B. Exposition(说明文) C. Argumentation(议论文) 2. Person(A Fi): First person? Second person Third person 3emse时态: Past tense? The simple present tense?  Read for comprehension of the content during the summer holiday be caught in a rip why Where at the seaside ontent by swimming, ridinghow Who Mrs, Martins three children on surfboards play in the water, float away from the beach  Think about the following question 1. Why w