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曾经生活过的校园你是否记得，曾经谈笑的湖边你是否还记得，曾经在身边陪伴你的朋友是否还记得？我们每个人都曾经拥有过一段令人难忘的大学时光。如今已经毕业一年了，曾经的点点滴滴记忆犹新。 DoDid you still remember the campus once we have lived;, candid you recalled the lakelack whereonce we have laughed together;ing, forthemore, do you have in rememberancedid you remind the special friend who hads accompany with you no matter where you went. Each of us haved an unforgettable college time. So far, we have graduated from the universitycollege for one year, but every bit of the mesningful memory arehad still be fresh . 是否记得：指现在，用现在时； recall:忆起，表动作，用can引导比较好；lake是地点，所以用where引导；remind的用法应该是sth remind sb，而不是sb remind sth; university指大学，college指学院； 那年，我们背着满满的行李来到了这个陌生的地方，这就是我们理想的大学。军训的生活是艰苦的，每天的训练都令人汗流浃背。那时，我认识了你，我亲爱的朋友，从此军训变得不再枯燥。 Four years ago, we, were carryingied filled ull of luggage, came to thatis strange place, whichthat wasis our ideal university. Military life was hard and difficult, and every day of the training are very exhausted and sweaty.we were exhausted, with sweat streaming down our back after everyday’s training. At that time, I met you, my dear friend. , Ssince that, time the military training becaome no longer boring. 如果用carry，句子就应该是we carry filled luggage and came to that strange place，一定要有连词；否则就用独立句型表伴随，参照改好的句子； 每天上课、吃饭、休息都有你的陪伴。你就像我生活中不可缺少的一部分。因为我得贪睡，经常使你跟我一起迟到，但是，每次你都笑着跟我说没关系。有一次我生病了，你比我还着急，大晚上的跑到医务室帮我买药。那次病的比较严重，那么瘦弱的你竟然背起我就往医务室走。 We went to classwere went to school and hade meal together, inseparable like a person and his shadowalmost shadow by shadow. You werehad been anthe indispensable part of my life. Because of I was somnolent,snooze we were often late forto class., Hhowever, you never blamed me and smiled to me: “that’s all right; ,don’t put it inon mind”. Once I got stomachache, and e,you were worried more seriously than meI. And , you went to clinic to buy medicine for me. Latter on, as my stomache became more severeserioues, you carriedy me on your thin shoulders, and walked to the clinic fastly. Went to school一般表示从家里到学校；因为大学里都是住在校